Key words: local sports centre, improvements to make it popular with young people, manager asked you, write a report making suggestions, decor & facilities, range of activities, publicity
1 Ways to improve the sport centre to make it more popular with young people.
2 The manager of the sports centre.
3 Decor and facilities, range of activities, publicity
4 Formal style
1 Ways to improve the sport centre to make it more popular with young people.
2 The manager of the sports centre.
3 Decor and facilities, range of activities, publicity
4 Formal style
a)
1 D 2 A 3 C 4 E 5 8
b)
make suggestions/recommendations: paragraphs 2, 3 & 4 (Decor & Facilities, Range of Activities and Publicity)
state the purpose of the report: I (Introduction)
summarise the main points: 5 (Conclusion)
offer a personal opinion: 5 (Conclusion)
1 D 2 A 3 C 4 E 5 8
b)
make suggestions/recommendations: paragraphs 2, 3 & 4 (Decor & Facilities, Range of Activities and Publicity)
state the purpose of the report: I (Introduction)
summarise the main points: 5 (Conclusion)
offer a personal opinion: 5 (Conclusion)
Informal style – Formal style
I’m writing this report to tell you what I think – The aim of this report is to suggest
… need to be more modern – are in need of being updated
… is not used enough – is underused
Not many people know about the centre. – The centre is not very well-known in the community.
… they aren’t things that young people like that much – they are not appealing enough to young people
… a cheap way of getting – … an inexpensive way of attracting
… would make more young people use the centre – would certainly attract more young people to the centre
I’m writing this report to tell you what I think – The aim of this report is to suggest
… need to be more modern – are in need of being updated
… is not used enough – is underused
Not many people know about the centre. – The centre is not very well-known in the community.
… they aren’t things that young people like that much – they are not appealing enough to young people
… a cheap way of getting – … an inexpensive way of attracting
… would make more young people use the centre – would certainly attract more young people to the centre
Firstly = To begin with
In particular = especially
Although = Even though
Furthermore = In addition
For this reason = Therefore
All in all = to conclude
In particular = especially
Although = Even though
Furthermore = In addition
For this reason = Therefore
All in all = to conclude
A 1 The aim of 2 attract
В 1 To sum up 3 I strongly believe 2 of great benefit to 4 popular
В 1 To sum up 3 I strongly believe 2 of great benefit to 4 popular
1 At present, the shop sells only traditional stationary.
2 It would be a good idea to offer items that have been designed for younger people such as posters, stickers and modern school bags.
3 This would undoubtedly attract younger customers. Heading: A
2 It would be a good idea to offer items that have been designed for younger people such as posters, stickers and modern school bags.
3 This would undoubtedly attract younger customers. Heading: A
The report will be from me (a volunteer), to the director of the children’s hospital. Its purpose is to suggest improvements that would make the hospital a more pleasant place for children. I will write my report in a formal style.
а)
A General Environment
В Facilities/Resources
C Facilities/Resources
D Staff
b)
1 B 2 A 3 C 4 D
c)
Staff
Although the nurses in the hospital are both friendly and hardworking, there are often not enough on duty. One suggestion would be to employ more nurses. If we were to do this, children would get better care.
Facilities/Resources
The hospital currently has limited outdoor space for children to play. I would suggest that an indoor playroom be made. By doing this, children have more play space available to them. In addition, as there is a general lack of toys and books, I strongly recommend that we ask for donations of toys and books from the local community for the children’s entertainment.
General Environment
The general decor of the hospital is not attractive to children. Therefore, it would be a good idea to paint rooms in bright colours and decorate them with posters for children. Doing this would create a more appealing environment for children.
A General Environment
В Facilities/Resources
C Facilities/Resources
D Staff
b)
1 B 2 A 3 C 4 D
c)
Staff
Although the nurses in the hospital are both friendly and hardworking, there are often not enough on duty. One suggestion would be to employ more nurses. If we were to do this, children would get better care.
Facilities/Resources
The hospital currently has limited outdoor space for children to play. I would suggest that an indoor playroom be made. By doing this, children have more play space available to them. In addition, as there is a general lack of toys and books, I strongly recommend that we ask for donations of toys and books from the local community for the children’s entertainment.
General Environment
The general decor of the hospital is not attractive to children. Therefore, it would be a good idea to paint rooms in bright colours and decorate them with posters for children. Doing this would create a more appealing environment for children.
Introduction
This report aims to suggest ways of improving the hospital in order to make it a more pleasant place for children.
General Environment
The hospital dёcor is not attractive to children. I recommend we paint the rooms in bright colours and decorate them with posters. This would create a more appealing environment for children.
Facilities/Resources
The hospital currently has limited outdoor space for children to play. I would suggest that an indoor playroom be made. This way, children will have more play space available to them. In addition, as there is a general lack of toys and books, I strongly recommend that we ask for donations of toys and books from the local community for the children’s entertainment.
Staff
Although the nurses in the hospital are both friendly and hard-working, there are often not enough on duty. One suggestion would be to employ more nurses. If we were to do this, children would get better care.
Conclusion
In summary, I feel that improved decor and facilities and additional resources and staff would greatly improve the hospital. I strongly believe that we should try to do as much as possible to make the children’s time here as pleasant as possible and improve the standard of care.
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This report aims to suggest ways of improving the hospital in order to make it a more pleasant place for children.
General Environment
The hospital dёcor is not attractive to children. I recommend we paint the rooms in bright colours and decorate them with posters. This would create a more appealing environment for children.
Facilities/Resources
The hospital currently has limited outdoor space for children to play. I would suggest that an indoor playroom be made. This way, children will have more play space available to them. In addition, as there is a general lack of toys and books, I strongly recommend that we ask for donations of toys and books from the local community for the children’s entertainment.
Staff
Although the nurses in the hospital are both friendly and hard-working, there are often not enough on duty. One suggestion would be to employ more nurses. If we were to do this, children would get better care.
Conclusion
In summary, I feel that improved decor and facilities and additional resources and staff would greatly improve the hospital. I strongly believe that we should try to do as much as possible to make the children’s time here as pleasant as possible and improve the standard of care.