1 To begin with
2 so as to
3 Secondly
4 For this reason
5 Furthermore
6 Although
7 Finally
8 On the whole
9 especially
A Introduction
В Group Activities
C Food
D Opening/Closing Times
E Conclusion
2 so as to
3 Secondly
4 For this reason
5 Furthermore
6 Although
7 Finally
8 On the whole
9 especially
A Introduction
В Group Activities
C Food
D Opening/Closing Times
E Conclusion
1 E
2 В, C, D
3 A
4 E
2 В, C, D
3 A
4 E
Informal style – Formal style
… there aren’t many things to do at the centre… The social activities offered by the centre are extremely limited.
I’m writing this report to give you my opinions on … The purpose of this report is to recommend …
It’s a good idea to have social events all the time … I would recommend holding regular functions.
… isn’t open at times when teenagers are available. It does not operate at times that are convenient for teenagers.
… is not used enough. Is greatly underused.
… there aren’t many things to do at the centre… The social activities offered by the centre are extremely limited.
I’m writing this report to give you my opinions on … The purpose of this report is to recommend …
It’s a good idea to have social events all the time … I would recommend holding regular functions.
… isn’t open at times when teenagers are available. It does not operate at times that are convenient for teenagers.
… is not used enough. Is greatly underused.
A 1 Firstly
2 therefore
3 In order to
4 it would be a good idea to
В 1 The aim of
2 make suggestions
3 most suitable
C 1 All in all
2 be more popular
3 is attractive
2 therefore
3 In order to
4 it would be a good idea to
В 1 The aim of
2 make suggestions
3 most suitable
C 1 All in all
2 be more popular
3 is attractive
1 In summary
2 For this reason
3 one suggestion would be to
4 In spite of
5 I strongly suggest
6 In the first place
7 In addition
8 in particular
9 I am confident that
2 For this reason
3 one suggestion would be to
4 In spite of
5 I strongly suggest
6 In the first place
7 In addition
8 in particular
9 I am confident that
1 E 2 D 3 C 4 A 5 В
a)
1 C 2 A 3 В
(Suggested Answer)
Activities: Currently, there is a lack of outings and sports that appeal to children. I would strongly suggest introducing more exciting activities such as archery and go-karting.
Publicity: In addition, the social networking page is fairly inactive. It would be a good idea to post regular updates and distribute a monthly newsletter.
Cost: Moreover, the camp is expensive in comparison to other camps. I am confident that more children would sign up if we reduced the prices and offered discounted rates for group bookings.
b)
1 To make suggestions on how to improve the youth summer camp to attract more children.
2 Suggestions about how to attract more children.
3 Formal.
1 C 2 A 3 В
(Suggested Answer)
Activities: Currently, there is a lack of outings and sports that appeal to children. I would strongly suggest introducing more exciting activities such as archery and go-karting.
Publicity: In addition, the social networking page is fairly inactive. It would be a good idea to post regular updates and distribute a monthly newsletter.
Cost: Moreover, the camp is expensive in comparison to other camps. I am confident that more children would sign up if we reduced the prices and offered discounted rates for group bookings.
b)
1 To make suggestions on how to improve the youth summer camp to attract more children.
2 Suggestions about how to attract more children.
3 Formal.
(Suggested Answer)
Introduction
The purpose of this report is to suggest ways to attract more children to our youth summer camp.
Activities
To begin with, there is a lack of sports that appeal to children. I would strongly suggest introducing more exciting activities such as archery and go-karting in order to appeal to children of all ages. Furthermore, the summer camp does not organise outings. I am confident that a few trips to local places of interest would attract more children to the camp.
Publicity
Currently, the social networking page is fairly inactive. It would be a good idea to post regular updates and distribute a monthly newsletter so as to make more people aware of the summer camp and encourage them to attend.
Cost
Moreover, the camp is expensive in comparison to other camps. I am confident that more children would sign up if we reduced the prices and offered discounted rates for group bookings.
Conclusion
On the whole, I believe that a greater variety of activities, increased publicity and reduced cost would attract more children to our youth summer camp.
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Introduction
The purpose of this report is to suggest ways to attract more children to our youth summer camp.
Activities
To begin with, there is a lack of sports that appeal to children. I would strongly suggest introducing more exciting activities such as archery and go-karting in order to appeal to children of all ages. Furthermore, the summer camp does not organise outings. I am confident that a few trips to local places of interest would attract more children to the camp.
Publicity
Currently, the social networking page is fairly inactive. It would be a good idea to post regular updates and distribute a monthly newsletter so as to make more people aware of the summer camp and encourage them to attend.
Cost
Moreover, the camp is expensive in comparison to other camps. I am confident that more children would sign up if we reduced the prices and offered discounted rates for group bookings.
Conclusion
On the whole, I believe that a greater variety of activities, increased publicity and reduced cost would attract more children to our youth summer camp.